I'm currently reading through Tae Kim's guide to learn grammar. Most sections include at least one conversation between two characters that use the grammar learned in that section. As practice, I usually like to try translating the conversations myself and then check my work using the translation in the guide. However, the example conversation below doesn't have a translation (to my knowledge), so I would like some feedback on mine so I know if there are any issues with it. Thank you.
当たり前 (Obvious)
ジョン：日本語で何かを頼む時に、「あげる」「くれる」「もらう」の中でどれを使えばいいか、よく分からないんだよな。
John: When requesting something in Japanese, which out of「あげる」,「くれる」,「もらう」should I use? I don’t understand this well.
アリス：私が教えてあげようか？例を言ってみて。
Alice: Shall I give you information? Try to say an example.
ジョン：じゃ、他人に何かをしてあげる時にどれを使ったらいい？
John: Then, when I give something to another person which should be used?
アリス：それは、「あげる」でしょう？
Alice: That is「あげる」right?
ジョン：他人が自分のために何かをしてくれた時は？
John: When another person is given something for one’s benefit?
アリス：それは、当然「くれる」。
Alice: That is naturally「くれる」.
ジョン：最後に、自分が何かを他人にしてもらいたい時？
John: Lastly, when you want another person to do something for oneself?
アリス：…そんな質問を日本語で聞けるのなら、もう問題ないんじゃないの？
Alice: …If you are asking that kind of question in Japanese, there is already no problem is there?
ジョン：ごめん、自分の質問の意味も分かってなかった。
John: Sorry, I also didn’t understand the meaning of my own question.
アリス：…
Alice: …
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