I’m Applying for a Working Holiday Visa for Japan this year. Is this a good travel itenary for the application? I feel like it needs more detail, please enlighten me. Thank you xxx

Japan

Travel itinerary 

June: 
Hiroshima 

• See family friends in Hiroshima and experience city. 
• Do the shinamani Kaido explore . 

July: 

Explore Kyushu Island. 
Find a job for a month and explore the coast.
Explore fukuoka 
Go to Miyazaki 
Go Yakushima Island and go explore the forests on the island.  

August 
Kobe, Osaka and kyto. 

• Go to Yoshino Kumano National Park 
• Explore surrounding area 
• Go to the Bonfire festival in kyoto
•  Yodogawa Firework festival 

September 
Tokyo 
Explore the city.
Go to the imperial Palace 
I’ve always found tokyo amazing inspiring 
Find fellow artists and get stuck into a scene creating films.
October 
Tokyo 

Novermber 
Find a ski Season Work

December 
Find Ski Season work

January 
Tokyo 

Febuary 

March 
Yamagata 
hike at Yamadera temple
Enoy the hot springs 

April 
Travel back to hiroshima 
Spend time with friends/family.