It would mean so much to me if people could check out my article on Inokism and share any feedback!
by BrandoCalrissian01
It would mean so much to me if people could check out my article on Inokism and share any feedback!
by BrandoCalrissian01
1 comment
Hi, thank you for sharing this. I really enjoyed reading it. You asked for feedback…
The good:
Engaging yet informative writing style
A lot of detail and history
You managed to tell a coherent story across the whole article
The bad:
Your reference style is a mess
You sometimes repeat whole sentences, as if this is an amalgamation of a weekly short series and you’re recapping
Again, thank you for sharing, I learned a lot.
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