I wrote some haiku, can i have your opinion?

I used a dictionary, I'm not sure if they are grammatically correct and convey what I meant. I didn't respect the rule of using seasonal words but

飛行機や

携帯の黒 

映し出す

Plane reflects in the cellphone's blackness (aka the screen). About how the rest of the world constantly comes into your personal bubble when you don't expect it

含む泥 

絞る足形

吸っている

Mud embrace, footprint press, kiss. About the vacuum effect when you step into mud, in some sort of romantic way.

葉が落ちて 

髪は同様 

春来るか

leaves fall, hair does the same, will spring come? About hoping/wondering if things will go better as you're getting old

いい雨滴

地球通して

掘って持つ 

Good raindrop, through earth, dig and hold it. About how rain takes a bit of everything they go through

虹たって

蝸牛潰すな 

目を下げて

Despite the rainbow, don't step on snails, lower your eyes. About not stepping on snails during the rain, and letting a pretty ephemeral thing to distract you from what's it important.

見たくない

白髪から白い

犬飼って 

Because i don't want to see white hair, i have a white dog. About not wanting to see time passing and the death coming for your loved one.

by IWannaPetARacoon